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annafugazzi ([personal profile] annafugazzi) wrote2006-08-30 11:58 am

Don't Do What Johnny Don't Does

"Harry," Draco stopped his words with a kiss. "Stop talking," he pulled away long enough to say, then came back to Harry's moth.


Um, yeah, I fixed that. Spellcheckers are not proofreaders.
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[identity profile] mananeh.livejournal.com 2006-08-30 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
HAHAHA!

Oh, I don't know if you should have fixed it - I quite like the idea of Harry with a pet moth! There could be a nail-biting moment where Hedwig tries to eat it. And Harry could be jealous that Draco's going to the moth for snogs instead of to Harry. :)

I once read a fic where Snape 'stalked' his potions supply cupboard. It had me in stitches - oh, there I go again! There's just something comical about the image of Snape hiding behind a desk or something and glaring at hs cupboard!