*throws confetti* Congrats on finishing! This is a beautiful story, and I've enjoyed every bit.
This last chapter made a really nice denouement. We see a family in all its ways, positive and negative. A bit of farewell music for Draco, and for us the readers.
I really admire how real and down to earth you made this story. There is magic and a burgeoning relationship. But there were always those awkward bits that ring true to life: being interrupted to set the spells so as not to be interrupted by kids (again!). The last pass through the house giving us a final glimpse at their lives together.
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Date: 2008-04-30 05:42 pm (UTC)This last chapter made a really nice denouement. We see a family in all its ways, positive and negative. A bit of farewell music for Draco, and for us the readers.
I really admire how real and down to earth you made this story. There is magic and a burgeoning relationship. But there were always those awkward bits that ring true to life: being interrupted to set the spells so as not to be interrupted by kids (again!). The last pass through the house giving us a final glimpse at their lives together.
I'm going to miss these people!